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Make the devil cry
Name: Atlas
age: 120(looks 32)
Race: Demon
Personality: Atlas is usually a a calm cheerful person. He is always looking to learn something new and is curious about the unknown. He does not tolerate anyone who attacks an innocent person on random or because the were ordered to. He dislikes Total chaos and mindless destruction. He loves making new friends. He loves reading literature, as well as playing chess. He is the kind of person who will stop and help a senior citizen cross the street or use his powers to help a flower grow. He is a person who upholds the law and is, at times, considered a vigilante. During his freetime he will do a ton of research and invent new things but keep it in his house locked away. Primarily because h made a cappuccino machine into a transformer and still dispense cappuccino and coffee. He is looking for someone to love still, because his standards for girls are really high and not very many fit his standards. He is very formal and chivalrous. He is very friendly with both people and animals just because they are usually nice to him. *note that this only applies when he is in his human form* When he is in his demon form he is a ferocious fighter but still has a conscience and moral in mind while fighting.
appearance:
Human Form
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Demon Form
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History: Atlas was born in 1400. He cannot remember his parents names because he had forgot them upon becoming an immortal. His father an mother were count and countess of a unknown remote area of Botchwood. The town was roughly only about a 10 square miles big. Atlas was to be the heir to his father's throne upon his fathers death, if atlas was of age. His father was a man of Honor, courage, and loyalty. In other words he would do anything for the British crown. Atlas was taught by scholars at an early age by whim of his mother. Her theory was that if his mind is like a sponge at his young age and if he was given all of this information he would grow up to be smarter.
upon reaching seven years of age, his father had sent him to be trained to become a night. His theory was that if he was a night the people would follow him better. Atlas' mother begged to differ. Atlas had lasted 6 years of being a squire and was sent back because the night said Atlas wasn't strong enough. Atlas's father was furious and almost disowned atlas from his family. Atlas had regained his father's respect by coming with a cunning and nearly unbeatable strategy for Botchwood's defense for wartime. Atlas's plan was to have land markers, such as broken wagons and large rocks, for distance keys and targets for the towns catapults. The other part of the plan was to have archers disguised as peasants and hunters to walk around and scout the area for enemy troops as well as fool the enemy. At first Atlas's father disagreed with it but wanted to entertain his son and show that it would not work. A month after getting this plan in motion, there was a small scale Norse invasion. The plan had worked exactly to Atlas's expectations and his father was surprised. Atlas had earned his father's respect back ever since that day. At the age of fifteen a traveling druid had visited Botchwood and lodged at the local inn. Atlas had read up on Druid heritage as well as beliefs and was intrigued and the next day approached the druid and talked with him. The Druid was no older than atlas and was nearly as smart as him. Atlas had convince his father and mother to let the druid stay with them as Atlas's friend and adviser.
Atlas and the druid soon became as thick as thieves. The Druid had taught Atlas everything he knew about Druidism and even started teaching Atlas some magic. Atlas was most intrigued with the magic. By the age of twenty-five atlas was wedded to a warrior princess named Scryer. Atlas and Scryer loved each other very much. When Atlas had took the throne of count of Botchwood when his parents had passed away because of disease, Atlas had started going on long journeys with a small detachment of nights and archers to London to speak with the king about military strategy. while he was gone he had two people watch over Scryer. One was a guardian named Liam. Liam was a Champion of fighting everywhere. the other was his Child hood Friend Matthew, the druid who was his adviser. Upon atlas's fifth return form London he had found out that his wife had been cheating on him with another man, there was not any proof so atlas confined it to the back of his head. This had happened more frequently as reports from Matthew had told the young count.
It was after a military campaign of England that he found out who it was. Upon his return, the town was silent. Matthew had met atlas at the gates and said that his wife and the other man was having intercourse at the moment and now was the time to find the culprit. Sure enough Atlas ran silently to his chamber where he heard the sounds of his wife having sexual intercourse with another man. Atlas had clutched his sword was nearly about to burst in to tears of depression and fury. The door had opened and on the bed was Scyer and Guardian Liam having sex right before Atlas's eyes. Atlas had screamed and drew his sword and went to charge the two to kill. He was held back by Matthew and another knight.
Atlas had them both jailed and wrote to the king. The king had convened the high court of England and the trial began. Liam and Scryer was to be sentenced to death. Atlas, still loving scryer as he once did could not bear it so he convinced the king to give Scryer another punishment. The king complied and said that she was to be held in the stock for 7 weeks with little to no food. Furious with Liam atlas had also convinced the king to let Atlas duel Liam to the death. The King was intrigued and granted the request. It was two days later and the duel began. At first it was in Liam's favor but atlas had gained the upper hand by using tactic and magic. Scryer was forced to watch. It was heading on the second hour when Liam was pinned to the ground and Atlas was about the deliver the final finishing blow that would kill Liam and tame Atlas's fury. Atlas was seconds away form killing Liam when he was stabbed in the back and his throat was cut. He fell down dying. He looked up and saw his wife Scryer with a bloody sword in her hands. Then everything faded to black.
Atlas's body was dead. Atlas Awoke in a black abyss with land or living thing in sight. After about an hour of floating there in that abyss atlas could hear a voice in his head. The voice had said that he could give atlas what he wants and in return atlas would have to become his servant and give up his humanity. At the time atlas didn't care so he agreed and accepted the voices contract. Atlas then blacked out. He had awoken an hour later outside his former hometown. But he was different. His skin was much tougher and black all around. Around his black skin was an exoskeleton that had build up to become much thicker around the joints. His hair was longer and now white. His skin of his face and neck are pale white and his eyes. He saw his sword transform into a long spear that he could see traces of the elements surging up and down it. Atlas had come here to do one thing and one thing only. He started to walk into the town. An hour later it was set a blaze and Liam and scryer's skeletons were in pieces with out the skin or any other bodily tissue. Atlas continued to serve the Voice in his head who he had came learn was the dark Demon Emperor Mundus. As the years went by Atlas started to hate Mundus. All Mundus wanted was destruction and would go to no lengths to achieve. Even though Atlas owed Mundus a lot, he wanted to be set free from the Dark Emperor. That time came when Mundus started to form up his forces at an island with a castle on it. Atlas just sat in teh shadows undetected and watched teh events at this castle unfold. he watched Dante through his endeavors at this castle in hopes that Dante will be the one to Set him free. Upon Mundus defeat Atlas didn't seek revenge. Instead he wants to congratulate Dante on defeating the Dark Emperor. He now wanders the earth and the demon realm in search of dante to thank him and repay him for freeing him from Mundus's control.
Special:
Strengths: Atlas is a demon who can take form of an normal human due to years of training. He also has the ability to cast elemental attacks in the shape of spheres at his targets and infuse his blade with those elements. Atlas normally assumes his human form which are the set abilities above
Devil Trigger: Atlas takes on his true demon form and his sword changes into a spear that can extend to great lengths at a very fast speed. Atlas's speed also increases tremendously while in his DT. Speed wise he can rival some of the demon worlds most powerful demons, But strength wise he can take on grade B Demons with some ease and have difficulty with Grade A. All in all, Atlas's demon form is that of an Grade A demon.
**DT in human world only lasts 5 posts, Demon world it lasts 10, before the extra power boost goes away but still retains form and weapon**
Extras:
****Weaknesses Atlas's main weakness is that he succumbs to his emotions easily and can get distracted, or enraged. One can also counter his elemental attacks which will reverse the damage onto atlas with the opposite element. Atlas can also be taunted easily which will make him fumble and cause mistakes. If the taunting happens continuously atlas learns quickly to ignore the taunts and focus on the fight. (Maximum of 5 taunts per fight)
Devil Hunter Resume: NA
**Very Important** Sample Post: It was a cold damp day in the London ruins where Atlas had emerged from his secluded and cut off home. He had heard and read much throughout the years. He could tell he was in the center of London's capital. He turned around and made sure he had his sword before closing the old Rustic door to his hide away. Atlas looked up to the sky as his black wings erected from his back and extended. He bent his knees and jumped up and took flight into the Night. He flew around London noticing the change it had undergone since his time. Atlas had accepted his fate as a monster and doesn't seek redemption from his deeds. As he flew he started remembering his past and why he was the way he is now. His anger was building up and was stopped b the sound of gun fire. Atlas immediately changed his flight course and landed a few hundred feet away adn retracted his wings.
Atlas had walked into the scene to see a man wearing a Nazi uniform pointing a gun at an unarmed female who seemed as if she were near death. Atlas stepped forward and spoke with his velvet voice. "To the man who has no dignity or honor. A man who attacks the innocent and unarmed is not a man, but a coward." He said as the Nazi turned around and pointed his gun at Atlas and started to speak. Atlas had cut him off and wielded his Rapier and charged the man. The Nazi had opened fired and sprayed the bullets at atlas. Only a few had landed hits but atlas had continued his charge as if he didn't feel the pain. Once close enough he got into a fencing stance and sliced at both sides of the Nazi's neck with speed and precision. The Nazi fumbled to put another clip in while doing his best to dodge the attacks. Once the clip was in he had unleashed it into Atlas' upper and lower torso. Atlas stepped back with blood rushing down his chest onto his clothes. Atlas remained standing and looked up at the Nazi. Atlas summoned the strength he had left in his body and lunged at the Nazi and cut his head clean off. Atlas fell the the ground. The wounded female couldn't move and was in aw from what just happened. Atlas had remained laying down for about half and hour an hour. After that time he got up and cracked his neck and the female could see his wounds closing up after pushing the bullets out. The woman started to scream out of fear then pain. Atlas had snapped his fingers and sent a fireball straight at the female and she was set ablaze. It wasn't long before the women had died. Atlas felt no pity or remorse. He had done her a favor. He then took flight again into the night sky.
**please note that sample is from another site, it is my character i assure you i can provide proof if necesary**
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